Not bad. Some room for improvement
Remove the dbz style from the fights. No offense, but it doesn't look good in MMZ. I love the idea, and can't wait to see where this goes. You do need sound effects. I have some MMX style sounds if you need them. Now, who is the cyber elf. It sounds like X, but the original X is gone by the end of MMZ3. But, I won't say anything about that, it is your story after all. I did notice, you need to work on the action. I didn't like the energy beam that looked like it was coming out of Zero's dick. There are custom MMZ sprites on Sprites Inc you could use for the special poses. I didn't like that Zero had a tendency to disappear in the fight, but that falls in the no dbz area of this review. I have special effects if you need those (because, no offense, those looked terrible except for a few). Anyway, summing it up. No DBZ style, please! and, sound effects and better special effects. All in all, very nice first flash. Somewhat better than my first flash (made for Neo Fusion's MK collab)