arg!!!!
First, how is this 9.8 MB? It's just a few tweens. The quality needs to improve. I'm sorry, I don't care what your author comment says. It is a real problem, especially considering the fact that it is 9.8 mb. Also, you already submitted this at least once. Stop sending the same thing. It's annoying. i saw this the other day. here's what you should do next...
practice, practice practice. You need a few more skills before you make anymore animations. No offense, I am trying to be as fair as humanly possible. The audio is alright, alittle loud. Try to compress the file before submission. A lot of people are going to have problems loading this, and the fact that this doesn't have a preloader doesn't help. download one in the downloads section.