SS4FlameAlchemist's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario:Vs Bowser]

I agree with the guy below me.

This is one of the most overdone ideas here. But, it is your flash, not mine.

Now, the improvements...

1. The running seemed to be a little slow. Mario didn't move as fast as he should have. The whole fight was a little slow paced, but it got the job done.

2. The music didn't seem to fit. I sense some inspiration from the Power Star series. The song, the sprites, the fight. It seemed like you tried to do it in the same style.

Anyway, everything seemed to go smoothly, except for when it went from the fight suddenly stopping to about halfway through the credits. I have no clue what caused that... and I don't even pretend to know... Anyway, I hope this helps you out. Bad English? You speak English better than some people I know. And English is their FIRST language. But, if you need help with text or possible sentence structure in future flashes, I would be happy to help.

[EEnE Z Intro]

Interesting.

I can't wait. Sonic and EENE? That's going to be... interesting. Well, keep up the good work. Can't wait to see where the series goes from here. You definitely look like you have a lot planned out.

[Megaman's Massacre]

Awesome. Just... awesome.

This is great. Once I finish my current project, I will be doing a tribute to this flash. It was that awesome.

[No Brainer]

"Look how fast I'm going!"

"AHHH SHIIIIIIII-" Awesome. You guys have some of the funniest cartoons out there. Creative, and funny. I loved this one.

[SMB: The Mushroom Hero 5]

Ripoff...

We didn't even get to see the mysterious all knowing whoever it was... Oh well. This was a very well made series.

You nailed the style down perfectly, but I thought the end was a little over the top...

And as for the text. Not everyone reads as fast as me. You should stick with the space bar to continue the text. That way people aren't rushed.

But, while it wasn't perfect, it was very good, although there were a few songs that didn't really fit, but whatever... It's your series, not mine.

Good job on an awesome series. Hope the next series is just as good. Now, is there a name for it yet, or do I just wait for it? (so I know what to look for when it hits the portal)

Link2370 responds:

Thanks for the review.

It'll be called SMB2: The Arrival 6. SMB2 shows that it's the second saga, and the 6 represents the overall episode number.

[Pokemon: Fated Battle]

heh...

I don't really care for pokemon anymore, and this caught my interest. I liked the DBZ style you gave it. Anyway, not bad. Not bad at all.

As for AS3, yes. It is a nightmare. That's why I use AS2 instead. You should be able to substitute it.

[Terminator Infiltration]

funny...

It was perfect. In truth though, they didn't know what the Terminator looked like in terminator 1 when that part happened where he came in.

Still. It's funny. and I like it. I already watched it like 4 times and it made me laugh each time.

BenFella responds:

True that. Thanks for the review!

[Sonic: TAO Part 3]

Very nice.

Glad to see this is back in business. I love this series, and I can't wait to see what you have in store. The battle scene was awesome, and different. I loved how well it was put together.

There is only one problem. The animation was choppy, and really slow during the battle. It gets on your nerves after awhile, but the fight was so good, I really didn't care. But, what happened to Amy? Chaos control attack? I didn't quite understand that part. Oh well...

Akradon responds:

Thanks mate! first 10 XD The bit that happened to Amy, it was just supposed to enhance what was happening, the shock of it all etc.

Im slowly learnin how to make an amazing battle scene, so hopefully, next ep :D

Hope to see you back here soon :D

[Sonic Battle: Collab]

a little disappointing.

good animation, but the collab made next to no sense at all... not bad though for a quick view, but not something I plan to watch again.

Pienkaito responds:

Wait... You expected a story in this?
Let me qoute: "This collaboration is about Sonic and others, fighting just for fun. Punching their brains out and kicking their bones apart with a few guest stars."

Is it really that hard to understand?

[Sonic Sprite Battle]

needs some improvement.

But you have the basics down. And that's good. There are only a few things keeping this from being a 10.

First, you need to work on the backgrounds and proportions. There were parts that went out of proportion. That is the biggest problem and needs to be addressed immediately. Another problem (kinda goes with this one), is the speed. The characters moved extremely slow. It wasn't lag, and I think bumping up the FPS would eat out that problem in a second.

Second, yeah, it's a total SMBZ ripoff. You even used the same song from SMBZ 7. Being a fan is fine, but try to put a different spin on it. You'll get higher scores if you try not to be a ripoff completely. There really isn't anything to differentiate this from the other hundreds of these types of flashes. If you can manage to put a new spin on your flash, it would draw more of a crowd than just SMBZ fans and SMBZ haters.

In the words of R1665 (another flash author), "I hope I don't inspire the same kind of fan fiction Alvin Earthworm did with the SMBZ series. That man created a monster."