SS4FlameAlchemist's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Real Legend 4]

good, but needs improvement

Sorry, but this was not on par with the others. This one had to be the shortest of the four. How could the file size get so large when this one is the shortest? Also, a lot of the jokes were kind of stale. I liked a few, like the thing with the iron boots and when they got to the boss. Also, the ending is VERY obvious it was rushed. You could have at least transitioned from the boss fight to Ruto's ending better. Try to fix this stuff when you make another, if you make another. This one just was nowhere near as good as it should have been. The jokes you should have been able to do in the water temple should have been near endless. I did like the dark link fight though. I didn't like the dbz style end of the fight, but whatever.

[IAMW, Charlie Brown]

Very nice.

I loved the animations. I thought I was watching a real charlie brown cartoon. Very nice job.

[Robot Master GP: Round 1]

pretty good

The only thing I see that is a little awkward is the jumping. The jumping seemed a little slow. Can't wait to see more. Maybe you should name the series something like Robot master grand tournament or something. The name as it is now is kinda vague. Well, keep up the good work.

[Cat Vader 2]

Nice.

I honestly didn't think you'd use any new jokes in this. I was pleasantly surprised. I love Cat Vader. You did an awesome job with this.

koit responds:

Thanks

There's not many more lines that can be mined for cat based humour. I may try in a few more years.

[DBZ Royal Part 1]

Ha.

I love the ending when Vegeta shows up out of nowhere. Then Freiza's got a look like he knows he's screwed. Pretty good. Definitely recommend not using handdrawn effects in a flash fight like in the first fight. Stick to sprited effects. Secondly, for how short that was, there is no reason it should have been 5.4 MB. Try to cut back on the music changes. Or cut the music to only put in what you will use. Lastly, you have to be consistant with your background style. I should not see white. The first background was not only in a different style and the size/proportions were off, but there was white space. The third background didn't have it at the bottom but at the top. Try to get the proportions better or use different style backgrounds that will conform to the size of your fighters. Hope this helps you out. You have some potential, but need a little boost to get there. Remember that no one gets perfect over night.

alafraga responds:

I don't now why the background was white, It's a glitch or something.

[Kirby vs Zero]

it was pretty good

Only thing I can see to improve on is that Zero's moves were so fast that I couldn't keep track of them. I think Zero probably should have won. He's made out of stuff that isn't even invented yet. But.. it's your flash, not mine. A really good fight. As short as it was. Good effects. You seem to have basic battle fights down. Can't wait to see more.

TankofDestruction responds:

thanks. yeah i thought about it and i guess i chose kirby for the heck of it. i knew some ppl might get angry over zero but i couldnt choose a "tie" cause that'd be boring

[Noob-Saibot Kills Smoke]

welp...

the only real problem i see is an overlap of sprite frames. As for sleepy turtle's comment, don't worry about that. just tell him to look up the sprites for noob and he will see that noob IS just a recolored ninja in the old games. The animation seems to flow smoothly. Just the overlap is the problem. Other than that, you've avoided a lot of pit falls of new sprite animators. Just be sure to add a preloader next time. they are downloadable from the downloads section and it takes two seconds to put it into the movie. Other than that, it was pretty good. Assuming this was a test animation.

xlilgizmox responds:

This was a test animation i haven't animated since december because i was recovering from my heart surgery but thanks for the review bro =D

[Mechagodzilla vs Megazord]

awesome.

I loved when the dragonzord came in. That fight should have been a little longer. The whole time I was thinking that it would be awesome if the dragonzord showed up. Anyway... enough of that.

It was an awesome fight. Really great. I honestly don't see any problems with anything. Not often I say it's perfect, but...

[SSJ4 Goku vs Super Buu]

nice.

the fight went smoothly, just make sure to make it last longer. it was quite short. Let's be honest, SS4 Goku would destroyed super buu. If it had been Super Buu Gohan-absorbed, it might have went like that. That form of super buu wouldn't have stood a chance in hell.

Now, there aren't many things for you to improve on here but here goes. I don't know if you made the super buu sprites, but the color is supposed to be pink, not peach-ish. Can't mark you for that since you probably didn't really make them. The only thing I noticed that you could probably fix is the sound. some places, the sound of the characters was really quiet, some it was loud. try to get a bit of a medium. Using the sounds from the actual show was a good touch though. Keep up the good work man. hope you plan on making more.

crazyfilms5000 responds:

Wow thanks :D, I changed the story a minute ago. I didnt make the sprites though, but if I use them again ill make sure to fix the color. I will work on my sound problems, and I will be uploading more, thanks again.

[The war of the Zero]

not bad

The biggest thing I notice that needs to be fixed is the "shakiness" of the sprites. The feet should be stationary and should not move on the fighting stance poses. That was the only thing I really noticed but can't really notice more until I see a battle or two. Looks good though.

So, obvious question: Is this supposed to be an Elf Wars thing? and is hunter Zero supposed to be Omega? Just curious about the story.

Funinyourgame responds:

Look below for your answer and thank you for your review, I will change those details in the first episode.

Have a nice day too ^^