SS4FlameAlchemist's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ultimate Sprite tutorial]

WOW. It has been SO long since I used flash I forgot how to trace a bitmap correctly....

[Robot Masters]

It was pretty good, but learn how to spell. You didn't spell ANY of the robot masters names right. It's not funny to not be able to read it.

ScottFalco responds:

IS THIS ROBOT MASTER SERIOUS?

[Iron Man vs Thor]

the humor was kinda bland. It would have been hiliarious if you had stopped at spiderman and iron man made a snide remark about him or something. But you kinda went overboard.

[Mario and the Penguin]

That was actually pretty good. I was expecting a joke involving all the crying he does in the game or something.

[MARIO vs MECHA MARIO]

not bad, but you loose points for no sound effects. Not only that, there's no preloader. No matter what stage of developement it's in, ALWAYS add a preloader. They are very easy to download and put in from the downloads section. Other than that, not bad. The special effects could use some work so they look more appropriate, but that may just be me.

mgze responds:

I'm sorry, but if you use good special effects or sound effects, the program slows

[DB AF: Episode 2]

I sorta agree with the guy below me, Your movements are incredibly choppy. You need to watch dbz flash styles like SMBZ and Sonic's Quest for power. That one will give you a GREAT idea of how dbz style flashes are supposed to look.

First, the blasts are supposed to be transparent. Second, some explosion effects would be preferred to the blasts just disappearing.

The grammar does need some work, that can easily be fixed by having people proofread your script.

Lastly and most importantly... HOLY CRAP. That was laggy as hell. Not only that, the file size is FAR larger than it should be for a project this size. It should be just under 10mb. I have seen people with projects longer than this bring it down to 8mb. That might be why it's laggy, but I don't think it is.

Winglessangelful responds:

your comment is not needed Unless it;s adviceful

[Sonic Toons]

1 star for good animation, but most of the ideas were rehashes of sonic paradoxes stuff.

[GARFIELD FALSH COLLAB!]

What the fuck. That wasted 5 minutes of my life. That was bad and you should feel bad.

The jokes didn't make any sense half the time or were just jokes by a five year old. Even the animation was terrible on most of them.

[On the next episode...]

FOR GOD'S SAKE! THE HORSE IS DEAD!

Ockeroid responds:

I'm sorry, the scars run deep.

[Sonic Hyper Transformation]

That should be an animated gif, not a flash movie. the music was unneccessary, and the aura was in the wrong place and the sprite moved around when it should have been staying still. There really isn't any real content, just a quick little transformation. Regardless of if it was a test or whatever, don't submit things like that unless there's more content